Wednesday, 10 April 2019

Danica Pourquoi Tale: How Belladonna is Poisonous


5 comments:

  1. well done I did find a few punctuation and grammar mistakes but it was definitely a nice story and I don't think anyone would have even thought about using that topic

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  2. I enjoyed your tale Danica, but there were a few spelling mistakes

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  3. well done Danica. some mistakes but it was a good pourquoi tale.

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  4. nice story it is a horror😈 ,but the sides was too long and it did not make senes much.I got the thing with De Guineey and Danica.😂😂funny

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  5. there were some spelling mistakes and some of the slides went by to quick

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