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Most of this didn't make any sense at all. I couldn't understand what the tale was about. Most of the pages went past way to quickly and I couldn't read the whole thing.
there isn't any punctuation and i find the timings a bit quick but overall its quite a funny story
you seem to have started in the middle of your story and skipped important information, and what was it even about?
Most of this didn't make any sense at all. I couldn't understand what the tale was about. Most of the pages went past way to quickly and I couldn't read the whole thing.
ReplyDeletethere isn't any punctuation and i find the timings a bit quick but overall its quite a funny story
ReplyDeleteyou seem to have started in the middle of your story and skipped important information, and what was it even about?
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