I really liked your story. I love how it shows that one friend is supporting another through a tough time. Great job. Keep up the good work. No mistakes found. :)
I loved your Pourqoui! I think it was reallly creative! I Loved the charater Ellie the Chincilla as I love the name!!! ;) You might want to watch the spelling and punchation. Overall, I think you did really well!
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ReplyDeleteI really liked your story. I love how it shows that one friend is supporting another through a tough time. Great job. Keep up the good work. No mistakes found. :)
ReplyDeleteI loved your Pourqoui! I think it was reallly creative! I Loved the charater Ellie the Chincilla as I love the name!!! ;) You might want to watch the spelling and punchation. Overall, I think you did really well!
ReplyDeletefound one or two mistakes. spacing ones. very amazing otherwise. :)
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